Wow Somran, that must have been quite a bash to the head! I can see you’ve tried really hard to use feelings and description to pull me in. Remember to organise your ideas into paragraphs. Miss A
Hello miss Anand, thank you for commenting on my work, next time i will use paragraph’s!
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Wow Somran, that must have been quite a bash to the head! I can see you’ve tried really hard to use feelings and description to pull me in.
Remember to organise your ideas into paragraphs.
Miss A
Hello miss Anand,
thank you for commenting on my work,
next time i will use paragraph’s!
From Somran