Brilliant Zainab, I’m so glad that you’ve managed to find the horse and help your family. You really created empathy in your reader through your vocab choices.
Next time try to use synonyms to avoid repeating the same word, like horse, over again.
Miss A
Brilliant Zainab, I’m so glad that you’ve managed to find the horse and help your family. You really created empathy in your reader through your vocab choices.
Next time try to use synonyms to avoid repeating the same word, like horse, over again.
Miss A