I like your descriptive letter to Mrs Dahl, it is very creative. I also like how you have used questions to create more effect for the reader, you have also created tension my using advanced words.
I like your descriptive letter! You have used great creativity on imagining that Mrs Dahl is actually there! Next time work on your punctuation. I.e: commas, full stops. Hamzah 6E!
I like your descriptive letter to Mrs Dahl, it is very creative. I also like how you have used questions to create more effect for the reader, you have also created tension my using advanced words.
Well Done Sara 5A
I like your descriptive letter! You have used great creativity on imagining that Mrs Dahl is actually there! Next time work on your punctuation. I.e: commas, full stops. Hamzah 6E!