That is a fantastic piece of writing Layla, filled with terror and suspense. You wrote some very powerful sentences to let your readers know how scary it was. I liked the repetition of the word alone in your opening sentences.
Nicola Richardson, Team 100wc, Tyne and Wear, UK
very good use of words
That is a fantastic piece of writing Layla, filled with terror and suspense. You wrote some very powerful sentences to let your readers know how scary it was. I liked the repetition of the word alone in your opening sentences.
Nicola Richardson, Team 100wc, Tyne and Wear, UK
Thank you Miss Richardson
I appreciate you writing some feed back to me and I totally agree with you
Thank You
From Miss Fray