HEY Hafsa it is Jinan I like your work
Some good vocabulary used. Check for full stops. Not HADDENT but HADN’T
OK
from Arjan
great job! punctuation is your only target!
very good
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HEY Hafsa it is Jinan I like your work
Some good vocabulary used. Check for full stops.
Not HADDENT but HADN’T
OK
from Arjan
great job! punctuation is your only target!
very good