WELL DONE
hey this my work and sorry if you can’t see the whole thing just press post a comment and you will be able to see my work (the whole thing)
cool I wonder what happens next
A great story Jinan, you have varied your sentence structure and you have used paragraphs when you are changing the topic, a great piece of writing. Zaeem 5B
A great story Jinan, you have used paragraphs when you are changing the topic, a great piece of writing. Zaeem 5B
I like your title and story but you need to check some spellings and punctuation. – Karolina 5B Gearies Primary School.
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WELL DONE
hey this my work and sorry if you can’t see the whole thing just press post a comment and you will be able to see my work (the whole thing)
cool I wonder what happens next
A great story Jinan, you have varied your sentence structure and you have used paragraphs when you are changing the topic, a great piece of writing. Zaeem 5B
A great story Jinan, you have used paragraphs when you are changing the topic, a great piece of writing. Zaeem 5B
I like your title and story but you need to check some spellings and punctuation. – Karolina 5B Gearies Primary School.