a story based on THE MAGIC FINGER

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6 Responses to a story based on THE MAGIC FINGER

  1. beguh1 says:

    WELL DONE

  2. chowj says:

    hey this my work and sorry if you can’t see the whole thing just press post a comment and you will be able to see my work (the whole thing)

  3. habej says:

    cool I wonder what happens next

  4. gandz says:

    A great story Jinan, you have varied your sentence structure and you have used paragraphs when you are changing the topic, a great piece of writing. Zaeem 5B

  5. gandz says:

    A great story Jinan, you have used paragraphs when you are changing the topic, a great piece of writing. Zaeem 5B

  6. tasik says:

    I like your title and story but you need to check some spellings and punctuation. – Karolina 5B Gearies Primary School.

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