Dylan 100 word(my ultimate adventure)

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  1. Ms Newton (Wellington, NZ) says:

    Hi Dylan,
    Your writing has a lot of action in it, a lot going on. Well done for trying some more sophisticated punctuation. What do you mean ‘potting the U.K…’ though?
    Thanks,
    Ms N
    🙂

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