Very good tea but I think you meant past in the second paragraph instead of pasted. It was very interesting how you was in a jungle on your birthday. In the first paragraph after when! the ! should’ve been when… to make it more dramatic but you can do it how you want. Great job.
Annais
Very good tea but I think you meant past in the second paragraph instead of pasted. It was very interesting how you was in a jungle on your birthday. In the first paragraph after when! the ! should’ve been when… to make it more dramatic but you can do it how you want. Great job.
Annais