THE ULTIMATE ADVENTURE

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3 Responses to THE ULTIMATE ADVENTURE

  1. singm says:

    A very creative and unique story Nayan but grammatically it should be my friend and I and when you wrote a one hour later its In one hour. However I really like your story how you used lots of descriptive words.

  2. thiyr says:

    I like your powerful.
    You need to put capital word.
    From: Rissikes

  3. ozkaa says:

    good explaining and vocb and why is the writing so big

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