Wow, you must be the quickest marathon runner ever Janna, just 15 minutes! I’m not sure whether Usain Bolt would beat Mo Farah in a marathon though? Well done on a creative piece of writing that uses a wide variety of punctuation effectively in such a small number of words. Your use of commas to separate the clauses in your sentences is very good.
Wow, you must be the quickest marathon runner ever Janna, just 15 minutes! I’m not sure whether Usain Bolt would beat Mo Farah in a marathon though? Well done on a creative piece of writing that uses a wide variety of punctuation effectively in such a small number of words. Your use of commas to separate the clauses in your sentences is very good.
Andy
(Year 6 teacher from Gloucester)
Thank you Andy i hope you read the other bunch of my other stories
Thanks!