This is a really descriptive piece of writing which was full of emotion and engaged the reader. I could feel the icy cold water as I was reading the words. We are proud of how your writing has developed. Well done and keep up the good work! (:
Thank you Mummy (:
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This is a really descriptive piece of writing which was full of emotion and engaged the reader. I could feel the icy cold water as I was reading the words. We are proud of how your writing has developed. Well done and keep up the good work! (:
Thank you Mummy (: