100 w ch

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1. mmatthews says:

   March 30, 2015 at 10:27 am

   I know you had a few issues with formatting but I can still read your story. 🙂
   You need to write in shorter sentences with full stops in the right place.

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2. kashi says:

   June 23, 2015 at 2:50 pm

   Ibrahim- 3J Really good story Joshvir I love the idea about the ninja breaking winter wonder land and Rodrick trying to save winter wonder land. But some spelling mistakes but still from then it is AAWWEESSOOMMEE!!!!!

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