Some of your words do not make sense you have to use more capital letters after your full stops and you have to put your punctuation in the right place. When you typed about the hotel you have to use your capital letters and you also have to see if your words are spelt correctly but you still done a very brilliant 100 word challenge story this is impressively good
sounds like you had a good adventure. Next time try to use a range of sentence starters.
Some of your words do not make sense you have to use more capital letters after your full stops and you have to put your punctuation in the right place. When you typed about the hotel you have to use your capital letters and you also have to see if your words are spelt correctly but you still done a very brilliant 100 word challenge story this is impressively good