I like your couplings, do you really think of school when you’re in the pool?
Spicy challenge – make another poem about things you dream about or wish for.
I think it really funny with rhymes and how you implemented them into your work
funny and good.
the only thing I would say is the fact that next time you do your work
make it a bit longer
Great poem. I really enjoyed reading it. I particularly enjoyed the second verse. Thank you from Jay from Mead,year 6
This is a very good poem and i love it
This is cool and i think you you should do more poems!!
I like your couplings, do you really think of school when you’re in the pool?
Spicy challenge – make another poem about things you dream about or wish for.
I think it really funny with rhymes and how you implemented them into your work
funny and good.
the only thing I would say is the fact that next time you do your work
make it a bit longer
I like your poem but I think you could of improved a bit where it says I think of cows when I’m about to bow.
ibrahim 5H really good use of rhyming in that poem and when will the rest of the poems come out? :):):):):):):):):
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