This is a very good description of the spies on their secret mission. You have used many descriptive words – most add to the reader’s understanding of the characters and events. Some words don’t seem to ‘fit’ as well – talented, wooly. It would be helpful if you reread your work and edited for complete sentences and spelling. There were some spots where I had to reread and guess to make sense. Keep up your writing as you have some very interesting ideas that hook your readers!
This is a very good description of the spies on their secret mission. You have used many descriptive words – most add to the reader’s understanding of the characters and events. Some words don’t seem to ‘fit’ as well – talented, wooly. It would be helpful if you reread your work and edited for complete sentences and spelling. There were some spots where I had to reread and guess to make sense. Keep up your writing as you have some very interesting ideas that hook your readers!