Aloha! I love how you connected this blog to the previous, I had to go back and read your part 1! Creative story line and nice use of dialog. Watch out for missed capitalizations when you proof read. I can’t wat to read part 3.
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Aloha!
I love how you connected this blog to the previous, I had to go back and read your part 1! Creative story line and nice use of dialog. Watch out for missed capitalizations when you proof read. I can’t wat to read part 3.