Thank you for entering this week’s 100 Word Challenge, Dylan. It’s great to see you experimenting with more complex punctuation, such as semi-colons, parenthesis and punctuation for dialogue. Please remember that you are writing for an audience from all over the world who may not know who ‘West Ham’ are, so if you are to include things like this, you will need to explain this some more. Keep up with your writing!
Thank you for entering this week’s 100 Word Challenge, Dylan. It’s great to see you experimenting with more complex punctuation, such as semi-colons, parenthesis and punctuation for dialogue. Please remember that you are writing for an audience from all over the world who may not know who ‘West Ham’ are, so if you are to include things like this, you will need to explain this some more. Keep up with your writing!