Good work Anjali, I like the way you used the prompt as a challenge instead of a treasure hunt or a band of marauding pirates. It was amazing how the X marks the spot challenge spread in lots of different places. It isn’t very good if lots of people are like outrageous bulls fuming with anger. Keep up the good work. Zaeem 5B
Wow! Fantastic reading for your 100 word challenge! I love the description that you gave to the island. Great job! Have a re-read of your work again (the word ‘someone’ seems out of place). You style of writing in 100 words is very clear and evident. What will happen next in the treasure hunt?
Good work Anjali, I like the way you used the prompt as a challenge instead of a treasure hunt or a band of marauding pirates. It was amazing how the X marks the spot challenge spread in lots of different places. It isn’t very good if lots of people are like outrageous bulls fuming with anger. Keep up the good work. Zaeem 5B
Well done Anjali, this was a really entertaining piece of writing, it left me on the edge of my seat. You are a AMAZING writer
Jayanna class 5B (:
Wow! Fantastic reading for your 100 word challenge! I love the description that you gave to the island. Great job! Have a re-read of your work again (the word ‘someone’ seems out of place). You style of writing in 100 words is very clear and evident. What will happen next in the treasure hunt?