Well done Sachien, I love the way you included a question to draw me into your story; I can imagine you would love being in a world maths. Remember to edit to check for errors, I can see places where you’ve missed out words.
Miss A
Excellent effort for your challenge! I really liked the way you used the word ‘gargantuan’ to mean big. Great word choice to begin your sentence with ‘spontaneously’. How would you further this piece of writing if you were to carry it on?
I like how you ended it with a question to leave the reader wanting to know more
Well done Sachien, I love the way you included a question to draw me into your story; I can imagine you would love being in a world maths. Remember to edit to check for errors, I can see places where you’ve missed out words.
Miss A
Excellent effort for your challenge! I really liked the way you used the word ‘gargantuan’ to mean big. Great word choice to begin your sentence with ‘spontaneously’. How would you further this piece of writing if you were to carry it on?