Noha this is a fantastic piece of work. I like how you have used interesting and descriptive words to create an image for the reader. However I think you should use some advanced punctuation to create more effect for the reader. Maybe you could change the font, as it will be easier to read. Other than that it is absolutely amazing. 🙂
From Sara
Noha this is a fantastic piece of work. I like how you have used interesting and descriptive words to create an image for the reader. However I think you should use some advanced punctuation to create more effect for the reader. Maybe you could change the font, as it will be easier to read. Other than that it is absolutely amazing. 🙂
From Sara