Hello zainab
I like your story because its very funny also you have used the prompt to match the story well,
Well done! Make sure next time use more adjectives to make your work more catch to read.
Keep up the hard work! somran
Wow Zainab!
Your story is very different to what i have ever
read E.G,
The room was raining with cornflakes and a lion was dancing to the beat of
a drum!
also i like your language E.G, gasped!
Also remember to put your punctuation before the end of your dialogue!
Keep up the great work!
From: Imaan. Janjua!
Wow Zainab, your work was brilliant you used great vocab and amazing describing words to really paint a picture in my mind. Your great ideas really drew me into your story. I can’t wait to read more!
Hello zainab
I like your story because its very funny also you have used the prompt to match the story well,
Well done! Make sure next time use more adjectives to make your work more catch to read.
Keep up the hard work! somran
Wow Zainab!
Your story is very different to what i have ever
read E.G,
The room was raining with cornflakes and a lion was dancing to the beat of
a drum!
also i like your language E.G, gasped!
Also remember to put your punctuation before the end of your dialogue!
Keep up the great work!
From: Imaan. Janjua!
Wow Zainab, your work was brilliant you used great vocab and amazing describing words to really paint a picture in my mind. Your great ideas really drew me into your story. I can’t wait to read more!
Jayanna