I am so glad that Jack showed his good character and did not take the sword to kill people! I think your story teaches us a very good lesson. Well done!
I really like the twist at the end where Jacks drops his sword. However in the second line you used ‘palace’ too many times.
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I am so glad that Jack showed his good character and did not take the sword to kill people! I think your story teaches us a very good lesson.
Well done!
I really like the twist at the end where Jacks drops his sword. However in the second line you used ‘palace’ too many times.