pinoccio syed

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2 Responses to pinoccio syed

  1. marlon&liam says:

    I like your poem because it made me think about Pinocchio and his big nose.
    Thank you!

    Yours sincerely
    Marlon and Liam from Mead School!

  2. Mr Drew says:

    This reminds me of as tory I have read about a boy who got everything he wished for. It turned into a nightmare.
    Your characters are really mean.
    How a bout a spicy challenge – could you try re-telling the story as something else, maybe a comedy or a horror story?

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