Some lovely description here – I love how you described being stiff. Also great use of the the word ‘pervaded’! Make sure that you read your writing through to check your punctuation and that it makes sense – you seem to have missed some words out here and there. You clearly have a great imagination though – keep it up!
Some lovely description here – I love how you described being stiff. Also great use of the the word ‘pervaded’! Make sure that you read your writing through to check your punctuation and that it makes sense – you seem to have missed some words out here and there. You clearly have a great imagination though – keep it up!