ESCAPE by Jayanna

4 Responses to ESCAPE by Jayanna

1. munir says:

   May 23, 2015 at 7:28 am

   Hi Jayanna,

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2. munir says:

   May 23, 2015 at 7:29 am

   Hi Jayanna,

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3. Gerry Button 100 wc team says:

   May 28, 2015 at 11:10 am

   Hi Jayanna, thank you for your entry this week, I enjoyed reading it. It sounded scary in the cave. I loved your cliff hanger ending, they are my favourite. Be careful not to slip from 1st person to 3rd person but otherwise keep it up.

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4. mulkr says:

   June 5, 2015 at 1:24 pm

   wow that was really cool and it all so sounded scary

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