Well Done Imaan
Tank you!
Hi Imaan, Your story had a lot of description. Maybe you could add a question at the end. From Prithikaa 🙂
cool i will take your advice on board!
Hi Imaan, I wonder what happened when you put the whole packet in your mouth! Remember to include the exact words of the prompt into your story. Miss A
yes miss!
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Well Done Imaan
Tank you!
Hi Imaan,
Your story had a lot of description. Maybe you could add a question
at the end.
From Prithikaa 🙂
cool i will take your advice on board!
Hi Imaan, I wonder what happened when you put the whole packet in your mouth! Remember to include the exact words of the prompt into your story.
Miss A
yes miss!