Oh my , what a spooky story Lakshithaa! I really love the way that you used different sentence lengths to build the tension. Remember to check your punctuation as it will make it easier to read. Miss A
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Oh my , what a spooky story Lakshithaa! I really love the way that you used different sentence lengths to build the tension. Remember to check your punctuation as it will make it easier to read.
Miss A