HI Kayshap, You certainly have created quite a fearsome beast! I love the way you used such precise detail and epic hero language. Watch tenses; you’re jumping between past and present. Can’t wait to read on! Mrs M
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HI Kayshap,
You certainly have created quite a fearsome beast! I love the way you used such precise detail and epic hero language.
Watch tenses; you’re jumping between past and present.
Can’t wait to read on!
Mrs M