I liked how you made your villain live in hell.
you added extra information. but there was a lot of description
🙂 The extra information really makes the entire story interesting wish: Historical Knowledge, how can he be related to Hercules and Thor. Thor is a Viking. Hercules is Greek. Punctuation. 🙂 The description of Blazzer really paints a picture
I like your story, maybe next time you could add more interesting adjectives.
I really like how you talked about the main characters background
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I liked how you made your villain live in hell.
you added extra information.
but there was a lot of description
🙂 The extra information really makes the entire story interesting
wish: Historical Knowledge, how can he be related to Hercules and Thor. Thor is a Viking. Hercules is Greek. Punctuation.
🙂 The description of Blazzer really paints a picture
I like your story, maybe next time you could add more interesting adjectives.
I really like how you talked about the main characters background