This is very descriptive i like the whey you have described your character well. Next time maybe you can use you can use similes and metaphors over all very good.
Hi Arojan,
This is great, fab detail but you need to act on the feedback you have already been given; organise your work into paragraphs and check tenses
Mrs M
Audrey was all alone she did not have any siblings or parents. Her parents had died as a curse was gave upon them.
that is very good Arojan-ia LOL I don’t know what you need to improve!!! IVA <3
star: great descriptive writing
Good adjectives like – royalty , destroy etc.
wish: maybe use more punctuation
This is very descriptive i like the whey you have described your character well. Next time maybe you can use you can use similes and metaphors over all very good.
Hi Arojan,
This is great, fab detail but you need to act on the feedback you have already been given; organise your work into paragraphs and check tenses
Mrs M
I love your descriptive writing