Hi Maleeha, Ella sounds like one brave heroine ! I found your last paragraph a little confusing; go back and edit it with a friend to make it clearer. Mrs M
You describe the island and your characters well. You’ve used the word “this” quite a lot….you could improve that I thi k if you look again.
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Hi Maleeha,
Ella sounds like one brave heroine ! I found your last paragraph a little confusing; go back and edit it with a friend to make it clearer.
Mrs M
You describe the island and your characters well. You’ve used the word “this” quite a lot….you could improve that I thi k if you look again.