the element sea part 2

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3 Responses to the element sea part 2

  1. nanand says:

    Hi Rehana,
    What a great continuation of your story, I can almost hear the narrator talking as I read; the sign of a talented writer! You really need to think about your target and think about your spelling and your punctuation before you publish, as you don’t want basic errors to take away from your amazing work.
    Mrs M

  2. C Billen says:

    Your writing has a strong beginning. Well done. Don’t forget to check your spelling!

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