HI Kerem, What a great way to describe the battle, I definitely had the feeling that their fight was epic. I do think you could have split that last paragraph into two to make your ending clearer. Well done, I enjoyed reading this. Mrs M
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HI Kerem,
What a great way to describe the battle, I definitely had the feeling that their fight was epic.
I do think you could have split that last paragraph into two to make your ending clearer.
Well done, I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M