Oh my, what an action-packed ending t your story! I love the way you included detail to make Amy even more heroic! Next time try to vary your sentence starters. I enjoyed reading this. Mrs M
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Oh my, what an action-packed ending t your story! I love the way you included detail to make Amy even more heroic!
Next time try to vary your sentence starters.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M