Hi Safaa, What an action -packed ending to your story; I love all your descriptive detail and the way you clearly brought your story to a close. Next time try to use synonyms to avoid repetition. Mrs M
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Hi Safaa,
What an action -packed ending to your story; I love all your descriptive detail and the way you clearly brought your story to a close.
Next time try to use synonyms to avoid repetition.
Mrs M