Hi Leon , I love the way you used action to bring your story to a close, you made good use of story language too to keep me gripped. Remember to edit before you publish Mrs M
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Hi Leon ,
I love the way you used action to bring your story to a close, you made good use of story language too to keep me gripped.
Remember to edit before you publish
Mrs M