Exellent work Zaira WOW!
well done Zaira. you done a great job you put lots of description. 5B student 🙂
well done zaira aleenas sister
GREAT WORK! I really love how you used good words to say how much you loved the trip
Class 41 by Isha and Asra
It sounds like you had a good time. Your work is so neat. Mrs O’Driscoll 4I
lovely work well done
Well done excellent writing keep up the good work. 🙂
It is good, but you have a few spelling mistakes.
Well done Zaira, you’ve used fabulous punctuation and you have used awesome adjectives to describe how you had a very good time. Next time try and use some conjunctions or connectives to make your writing more awesome.
wow Zaira this is really good. saffina 🙂
yo, sist your work was amazing but learn your spellings. #Aiza
Wow superb story especially for your age. Great work. 🙂
Well done 🙂 I really like how your writing
that’s amazing, nice handwriting too 🙂
well done that’s amazing, nice handwriting too 🙂 great work ziara
well done zaira your work is fantastic you have really neat handwriting
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Exellent work Zaira WOW!
well done Zaira. you done a great job you put lots of description. 5B student 🙂
well done zaira
aleenas sister
GREAT WORK!
I really love how you used good words to say how much you loved the trip
Class 41
by Isha and Asra
It sounds like you had a good time. Your work is so neat. Mrs O’Driscoll 4I
lovely work well done
Well done excellent writing keep up the good work.
🙂
It is good, but you have a few spelling mistakes.
Well done Zaira, you’ve used fabulous punctuation and you have used awesome adjectives to describe how you had a very good time. Next time try and use some conjunctions or connectives to make your writing more awesome.
wow Zaira this is really good. saffina 🙂
yo, sist your work was amazing but learn your spellings. #Aiza
Wow superb story especially for your age. Great work. 🙂
Well done 🙂
I really like how your writing
that’s amazing, nice handwriting too 🙂
well done that’s amazing, nice handwriting too 🙂 great work ziara
well done zaira your work is fantastic you have really neat handwriting