Hi Zareenah, You have made excellent use of descriptive language to draw me into your tale. Next time try not to make your ending so abrupt so the flow continues. I enjoyed reading this. Mrs M
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Hi Zareenah,
You have made excellent use of descriptive language to draw me into your tale.
Next time try not to make your ending so abrupt so the flow continues.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M