* = Good Description * = Good Use of creativity EBI = Less repetitive language
overall 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀
Very descriptive, Good that you used your imagination, Remember to use commas! : D
ZAREENAH THAT IS GREAT NOT TO REPEAT
Hi Zareenah, You have made good use imagery and repetition in your poem. Next time think about how rhythm can contribute. Mrs M
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* = Good Description
* = Good Use of creativity
EBI = Less repetitive language
overall 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀
Very descriptive,
Good that you used your imagination,
Remember to use commas! : D
ZAREENAH THAT IS GREAT NOT TO REPEAT
Hi Zareenah,
You have made good use imagery and repetition in your poem.
Next time think about how rhythm can contribute.
Mrs M