Wow good descriptive words( nice layout with colour too! 🙂 try to add some metophors.
Hi Khalisah Some very powerful imagery in your poem. Think about how rhythm can add to your effects. Mrs M
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Wow good descriptive words( nice layout with colour too! 🙂
try to add some metophors.
Hi Khalisah
Some very powerful imagery in your poem.
Think about how rhythm can add to your effects.
Mrs M