Gia, this is fantastic! I think that this poem is brilliant! However to make it even better, you could add a powerful line right at the end, but other than that this poem you have produced is superb! Pavan
thank you pav I really enjoyed reading yours too I will keep that in mind.
Hi Gia your work is totally brilliant! Maybe just to improve it ,which is totally up to you you could make it rhyme? 😉
thank you Zahra I will keep that in mind I was focusing on the rhythm but thank you anyway.
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Gia, this is fantastic! I think that this poem is brilliant!
However to make it even better, you could add a powerful line right at the end,
but other than that this poem you have produced is superb!
Pavan
thank you pav I really enjoyed reading yours too I will keep that in mind.
Hi Gia your work is totally brilliant!
Maybe just to improve it ,which is totally up to you
you could make it rhyme?
😉
thank you Zahra I will keep that in mind I was focusing on the rhythm but thank you anyway.