Gia, this is fantastic! I think that this poem is brilliant! However to make it even better, you could add a powerful line right at the end, but other than that this poem you have produced is superb! Pavan
thank you pav I really enjoyed reading yours too I will keep that in mind.
Hi Gia your work is totally brilliant! Maybe just to improve it ,which is totally up to you you could make it rhyme?
thank you Zahra I will keep that in mind I was focusing on the rhythm but thank you anyway.
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Gia, this is fantastic! I think that this poem is brilliant!
However to make it even better, you could add a powerful line right at the end,
but other than that this poem you have produced is superb!
Pavan
thank you pav I really enjoyed reading yours too I will keep that in mind.
Hi Gia your work is totally brilliant!
Maybe just to improve it ,which is totally up to you
you could make it rhyme?
thank you Zahra I will keep that in mind I was focusing on the rhythm but thank you anyway.