I like the way you used personification you forget an it
I like your descriptive words I like your rhymes maybe you could check some parts like ‘and if I don’t have I will be misjudged
Some lovely imagery here Jinan, with good structure. Remember to think about the rhythm of poetry too. Mrs M
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I like the way you used personification
you forget an it
I like your descriptive words
I like your rhymes
maybe you could check some parts like ‘and if I don’t have I will be misjudged
Some lovely imagery here Jinan, with good structure.
Remember to think about the rhythm of poetry too.
Mrs M