Hi Zaynab You have used repetition well to create a clear impression of your blanket. Try to use more grown up words to create a deeper atmosphere. Mrs M
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Hi Zaynab
You have used repetition well to create a clear impression of your blanket.
Try to use more grown up words to create a deeper atmosphere.
Mrs M