Kerem you have made excellent use of metaphor and personification to add real depth to your emotive poem. Just remember’ wraps’ was the meaning you wanted. Keep up the great writing
very good very good very good you should be more precise
Very good work I like it when you rhyme and overall good poem.
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Kerem you have made excellent use of metaphor and personification to add real depth to your emotive poem.
Just remember’ wraps’ was the meaning you wanted.
Keep up the great writing
very good very good very good you should be more precise
Very good work I like it when you rhyme and overall good poem.