the mysterious man

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3 Responses to the mysterious man

  1. balak says:

    Good description but try and correct your spellings: know body- nobody

  2. haidy says:

    Good description nandana I really like the how you described him

    From Yusuf

  3. nanand says:

    Hi Nandana,
    What wonderful use of descriptive language to create a clear impression of your baddy. Next time remember to check all your verbs are in the past.
    I enjoyed reading this.
    Mrs M

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