Good description but try and correct your spellings: know body- nobody
Good description nandana I really like the how you described him
From Yusuf
Hi Nandana, What wonderful use of descriptive language to create a clear impression of your baddy. Next time remember to check all your verbs are in the past. I enjoyed reading this. Mrs M
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Good description but try and correct your spellings: know body- nobody
Good description nandana I really like the how you described him
From Yusuf
Hi Nandana,
What wonderful use of descriptive language to create a clear impression of your baddy. Next time remember to check all your verbs are in the past.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M