A very good plot Hashim well done! :^)
Its really good but your punctuation are in the wrong places think carefully about them
Good adjectives! You could have used exclamation marks to make it scary but otherwise I liked your work.
What a funny story hashim. I really like how you compared him.
From Yusuf 5a
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A very good plot Hashim well done! :^)
Its really good but your punctuation are in the wrong places
think carefully about them
Good adjectives! You could have used exclamation marks to make it scary but otherwise I liked your work.
What a funny story hashim. I really like how you compared him.
From Yusuf 5a