Hi Joanna, You have used similes really well to create an impression of your villain in my head. Next time try to use shorter sentences to be more clear. I enjoyed reading this. Mrs M
thank you for the lovely message
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Hi Joanna,
You have used similes really well to create an impression of your villain in my head.
Next time try to use shorter sentences to be more clear.
I enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M
thank you for the lovely message