Brilliant Zahrah! I love the way you used clever description and smilies to influence my opinion and questions to draw me in. Next time think about using connectives to link ideas. I really enjoyed reading this. Mrs M
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Brilliant Zahrah! I love the way you used clever description and smilies to influence my opinion and questions to draw me in. Next time think about using connectives to link ideas.
I really enjoyed reading this.
Mrs M