Kayshap, this is an interesting idea. I also like the way you have used phrases to give your reader clues about what is going to happen next; this is the sign of a talented writer! Next time, think about using synonyms to avoid repetition. Mrs M
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Kayshap, this is an interesting idea. I also like the way you have used phrases to give your reader clues about what is going to happen next; this is the sign of a talented writer!
Next time, think about using synonyms to avoid repetition.
Mrs M