well done! you have used similes and metaphors to help paint a picture in my head (:
well done you used onomatopoeia and alliteration you also used a question next time use the expanded noun phrase
Wow, I am amazed, you have chosen words carefully to create an atmosphere try and use a rule of 3- you usually use 2 words to describe a noun Rhia
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well done! you have used similes and metaphors to help paint a picture in my head (:
well done you used onomatopoeia and alliteration you also used a question next time use the expanded noun phrase
Wow, I am amazed, you have chosen words carefully to create an atmosphere
try and use a rule of 3- you usually use 2 words to describe a noun
Rhia